I went to the pond which looks like it has not been washed for a month. When I went there, bwith mud. I both my feet were covered with mud. It was slippery like the ice skating ring at Taman Anggrek mall.When I stepped in the mud at the pond, it was slimy and gooey like a rotten eggmixed with dead fish. When i wanted to catch the fish, it went away.
When I caught the fish, it wiggled and jiggled, at my like it hand like it wanted to get out from a haunted house.
The pond smells like there is a dead fish at the bottom of the pond that is full of mud. I feel gross,discusting and yucky.
3 comments:
Your score will be 10/15. You don't put it in paragraph.
Matthew your score is 6/10 because your grammar is not correct, you have mistakes and you don't put paragraphs.
Your score is 5/10 because you don't put paragraphs and you grammar is wrong you also have some mistakes that you didn't notice.
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